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![[ Commission ] #15](https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/2ce99fb6-ad70-4df8-af0c-2688092b1f04/db0nqei-6f484fa4-9ac2-4d43-ae86-242487554acb.png/v1/crop/w_184,h_184,x_2,y_0,scl_0.27259259259259,q_70,strp/__commission____15_by_rinachanny_db0nqei-92s-2x.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9NTc3IiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvMmNlOTlmYjYtYWQ3MC00ZGY4LWFmMGMtMjY4ODA5MmIxZjA0XC9kYjBucWVpLTZmNDg0ZmE0LTlhYzItNGQ0My1hZTg2LTI0MjQ4NzU1NGFjYi5wbmciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9NjAwIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmltYWdlLm9wZXJhdGlvbnMiXX0.QsxcsSGAkU65DtvqgbTq9TBbz8QxBDjSDG_LbpGoqzY)
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![[P.C.] Sebastian](https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/922a297e-a2f7-43dc-896a-216e69ce8f9a/d7zadqe-5934c9cc-d6a7-4cdb-b584-76e814dc1fa1.png/v1/crop/w_184,h_184,x_0,y_0,scl_0.368/_p_c___sebastian_by_iipocket_d7zadqe-92s-2x.png?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9NTAwIiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvOTIyYTI5N2UtYTJmNy00M2RjLTg5NmEtMjE2ZTY5Y2U4ZjlhXC9kN3phZHFlLTU5MzRjOWNjLWQ2YTctNGNkYi1iNTg0LTc2ZTgxNGRjMWZhMS5wbmciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9NTAwIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmltYWdlLm9wZXJhdGlvbnMiXX0.cWX3gpRteFVif2CUh6kAPixPujkpNa8hdISrsysUuYk)
![[P.C.] Sebastian](https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/922a297e-a2f7-43dc-896a-216e69ce8f9a/d7zadqe-5934c9cc-d6a7-4cdb-b584-76e814dc1fa1.png/v1/crop/w_92,h_92,x_0,y_0,scl_0.184/_p_c___sebastian_by_iipocket_d7zadqe-92s.png?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9NTAwIiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvOTIyYTI5N2UtYTJmNy00M2RjLTg5NmEtMjE2ZTY5Y2U4ZjlhXC9kN3phZHFlLTU5MzRjOWNjLWQ2YTctNGNkYi1iNTg0LTc2ZTgxNGRjMWZhMS5wbmciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9NTAwIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmltYWdlLm9wZXJhdGlvbnMiXX0.cWX3gpRteFVif2CUh6kAPixPujkpNa8hdISrsysUuYk)
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Cons:
Her torso is too long.
Her nostrils look too round, and dark, like too contrasting.
The forearm on her left (our right) is too long.
Her face needs to be longer.
Her eyes look like they're not focused on the same thing.
The mouth is too round and the lines should go all the way through. Also, usually the top lip isn't usually that big.
Pros:
The shading is awesome.
The clothes look nice.
I love her hair.
The hands look great.
Overall this is pretty ok for a first realistic drawing ^_^
Her torso is too long. Her nostrils look too round, and dark, like too contrasting. The forearm on her left (our right) is too long. Her face needs to be longer. Her eyes look like they're not focused on the same thing. The mouth is too round and the lines should go all the way through. Also, usually the top lip isn't usually that big.Pros:
The shading is awesome. The clothes look nice. I love her hair. The hands look great.Overall this is pretty ok for a first realistic drawing ^_^